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This is a completely new style of photography to me, and I spent almost 1 hour taking photos till I get this result
A classic photo water splash. Enjoy!! Print with the full size available Submited to *PhotoLovers's contest Comments |
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April 19
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While the idea behind it is not original, I really like the tone in the water, it adds to the image a lot, making it more interesting and pleasing to view.
I really adore the sharpness and I am sure it is not easy to get.
The composition is good too, a good balance, leading the viewer to the focus point.
The angle on the other side I am not too keen on, I would have liked it more from straight aside, either, or, what would have made it more original too, straight from above. I could imagine this would work too and I haven't seen that too much yet.
I like the name and idea of being frozen in time, it really works well with the water droplets, and isn't that what we do with photography? Trying to freeze perfect moments?
But well done here!
If there is one thing that stands out and bothers me is the size ratio of your border. I think having it being that big on the top and two sides takes a lot of precious display size and appreciation out from your picture. Maybe a thin out border for the top and two sides would be enough, and just leaving the bottom one with your text and info would help that a lot. Great job
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